August 21, 2010

Web Writers: "You Have A Short Attention Span"

My conclusion is this. Write short, grammatical sentences and have other people edit them.

I probably should have broken that into more sentences. Let's review what isn't acceptable in web writing:
  • Semicolons
  • Long paragraphs
  • Long headers
  • Complex sentences
  • Sentences that aren't stuffed with keywords
  • Formal writing style
  • Exclamation points
  • Excessive bold and italics
  • "To be"
Some of this is common sense, carried over from print writing. Others were developed to work within the constraints of screen real estate. (Remember 640x480? Those were the days.) Killing semicolons, however, is advice I find odd. How else would you punctuate a list that has items requiring commas? "Mr. John Doe, Esq., Dr. Ibee Grumpy, MD, and Mrs. Jane Smith" is not as readable as "Mr. John Doe, Esq.; Dr. Ibee Grumpy, MD; and Mrs. Jane Smith".

Whoops, I exceeded the sixty-word-per-paragraph guideline. Take a deep breath.

How many words should there be in a paragraph? Let's take a look. Ask a Manager's most recent post will serve as an example. Excluding the introductory "A reader writes" paragraph, she averages 77 words per paragraph. Even a web writer's blog occasionally exceeds 60 words per paragraph. The paragraphs that don't are often one sentence long or sound choppy. I think paragraph length will follow from your writing style and your topic.

The next web writing tip is a short paragraph. Don't make grammatical mistakes. Proofread your text. Have someone else proofread your text.

Yes, make your content engaging. Yes, remember that websites aren't in order like a book. Yes, make your stuff easy to read and navigate.

The most important point to remember? Good web writing is good writing.

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